Shattered Dreams, Broken Promises

by Chelsey   Jul 23, 2007


Everyone has Dreams
Dreams that keep them hoping..
Hoping...Wishing...
Wishing for...Happiness..Love

Love you once held
Held in the palm of your hands
Hands that would gently caress...
Caress me throughout nights

Nights of passion...
Passion soon led to pain...
Pain deep in my heart
Heart that bled throughout dark days

Days filled with promises
Promises broken
Broken....shattered...
Shattered dreams

Collab done with Hellon...took us a while Hellon because these sorts of poems are tough to write with two people but I think it came out excellent and it got me out of writing like I usually do! Hope you enjoyed!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Chelsey and Hellon,

    Bravo to you both. I saw your name as the author, but after reading the first two lines, I knew that Hellon had a hand in this. I think it is her favorite structure to use.

    You both did a wonderful job with it.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    This is a great poem hey, never done a collab before but I'm sure there abit of a challenge, but a challenge that you've pulled off wonderfully.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey and Hellon
    What a wonderful piece. You are right Chelsey I have wondered many times how Hellon pulls these off all the time :)
    Great job ladies!
    Take care love Cindy

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