Comments : Shattered Dreams, Broken Promises

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey and Hellon
    What a wonderful piece. You are right Chelsey I have wondered many times how Hellon pulls these off all the time :)
    Great job ladies!
    Take care love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    This is a great poem hey, never done a collab before but I'm sure there abit of a challenge, but a challenge that you've pulled off wonderfully.

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Chelsey and Hellon,

    Bravo to you both. I saw your name as the author, but after reading the first two lines, I knew that Hellon had a hand in this. I think it is her favorite structure to use.

    You both did a wonderful job with it.

    Always,
    Jeannie