Bryan! this made me laugh! haha It was great!! and I get first comment! =] I love the ending the best. Very good job babe! keep it up!!

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Lol a really cute piece you have created here. I loved the style I should try this one. You do well with different poetry style and I can't wait to check out more of your pieces. Well done yet again on writing a nicely written poem.~mel

WHAT A GREAT POEM I WISH I COULD WRITE ONE LIKE THAT WELL IT CHEERED ME UP AFTER WRITING ONE FOR MY PAPA THANX FOR MAKING MY DAY A BETTER ONE x0x

Bryan,

STUPID FREAK!

o.O

Well, that's it. I'm going to roast the hell out of that talking toad. Ha. Let's see who's more stupid. T_T Stupid. Stupid. Stupid.

Anyway,

This was a helluva hilarious write. I guess it reveals what kind of thoughts you have in mind at the moment. Stupid. Lol, I kid! ;) Haha. My real delight to read it. Thanks for sharing, m'dear.

Love,
Debbie Cakes

Lol awesumpoem

Bryan
LMAO......This was great. What a tale you have penned. Imagery is excellent. Felt good to laugh :)
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Nice poem. it made me laugh. cool story and you have a very creative mind. i liked it alot.