Angel of...

by marlaina   Jul 23, 2007


I am the angel of darkness,
i am the angel of grief,
i am the angel of insanity,
something you expected least,
im not the angel of perfection,
i never have and never will be,
but ill try to live up to your expectations,
what else do you want from me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror

    Wow! I love your poetry. You are my favorite author on the site. This poem is amazing and you are talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Marlaina,
    Short, but to the point. I think that if you made this poem longer, then you could have even more emotion (you don't have to though). The use of the word "angel", made this poem unique to me. Darkness, grief, insanity. These are all great words for description, and you nailed it.
    I don't think that this poem particularly lept out at me, but that doesn't mean that it's bad!
    Keep it up, 4/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you please Comment and Rate one of my poems?
    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem but dont live up to others, live your life how you want to live it xxxxx

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