I've traveled far
where have you traveled?
Nowhere is what you should say
cause I haven't seen you in heaven lately
Heaven might be nowhere to you but it's far
and it's a wonderful feeling to walk in the presence of loved ones
since I am not loved
this feeling is Indescribable
Once you look over the soft pillow-like clouds
you are watching over those who were
"left behind"
Looking at what they are doing
Questions you might ask
do they still love me?
do they remember me?
Why are they crying?
Can I say bye?
etc...
There are many Questions
many aren't answered by "god"
but those which are answered have prayed
You will never find a place as beautiful as Heaven
No where you have been will be close
Angels look down everyday
Everyone has asked
What have I done?
You've done nothing
their love has helped you reach heaven
without their love...
Anna,
Never doubt your capability to write a meaningful line.
Most people can't comprehend how to describe something so complicated.
And you've done it well.