by Anna Apotheosis Jul 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Like a child would love. |
by Prophecies In Kodak
I like the metaphor behind this poem. And the rhyme scheme. It was a little more deep than your poetry above this. I wasnt ver fond of that. But rest assured, this is an excellent poem and from the heart. |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats a very good poem with very heartful emotions well doe i enjoyed the read xxx |