Anna,
Short, but I can understand the meaning of how you dedicated it to Domain Drioge. I think that this poem could be extremely well done if you made it just a little longer though. You don't have to, but that's just an idea.
Keep it up, probably a 3/5 though
With all due respect,
Hatori
P.S. If you get a chance, could you please comment and rate one of my poems? Thanks! ^.-
You are my best friend.
And, it was alright.
You should add to it,
Make that a stanza in a longer poem with depth and persistence about this person, Yea?