Great work keep it up honey xx

Wow kinda deep loved begining 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Faye Byrem,
This was a truly incredible piece of petry, and I am in aw at your use of words. They created such a strong image in my mind, so it felt like I was almost experiencing what was happening. The flow was perfect, the words, everything!
This was a pleasure to read, so keep it up, 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please comment and vote one of my poems?
Thanks!

Faye! I didn't know you were so great at poetry! Isn't this site wonderful? Go take a look at some of my poems. :)

Greatly written piece. This poem is deep and atmosphere that you created is excellent. You described emotions very well. 5/5

Well I like it. I think it is pretty good. I dont have enough experience of my own to give you any critique on it but keep up the good work