Fake

by Aaron   Jul 23, 2007


A thousand tears I've shed,
Ten thousand more un-said
There is not any feeling,
All my wounds need healing

Long ago when all was right,
There were no wrongs, no one to fight
Now it is here,
Screaming in my ear

This pain will not go,
What is this i have to show
The suffering will not end,
The love that you pretend

It kills me inside and out,
'Cuz all you do is shout
I know i mean nothing more,
Than a figure you pretend to adore

When my death comes,
Burning like the suns
He'll be gladly welcomed,
And to sacrifice, I scummed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tori

    I like it.
    Two thumbs up.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    I love the way that you put your real feelings and emotions into it

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Wow! This is an impressive poem! I love how you kept a great flow and the rhyming was perfect ^.^
    The first stanza:

    A thousand tears I've shed,
    Ten thousand more un-said
    There is not any feeling,
    All my wounds need healing

    Really caught my attention. "Ten thousand more un-said" had so much meaning and emotion in it. This poem really drew me in, so keep it up, and 5/5

    With all do respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you please RRC one of my poems?
    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was a 4.5 to me so that rounds up to a 5 lol but loved the beging especially first stanza maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    Good one

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