Good title, well done on the poem keep going xxxxx

WOW! I...wow! If you put anymore feeling into it I think I might have exploded. I wonder, do you use your mind to write these or your heart? It seems like both. I really love this poem! Good job!

~Morgan~

Wow superb..like your title it was really catchy though it was creepy too coz your question god himself.And i just like the way you put all the words, i can feel the emotions in here, anger and sadness. keep it up!!

There seems to a light at the end of the dark tunnel in this well written poem. in fact the rhyming left little to be desired. It is a 5

I don't know what to say. But all i know is that he does care about you, you're just not trying hard enough to get it through to him. Someday, things will be so much better, and then you'll look at this poem and say "wow, things really did get better, he does care." and I hope that day comes soon for you. The poem was great, loved every single word. 5/5

Great poem keep it up 5/5

Good boy! Keep it up and I'll put you in my favorites. Hey isn't Marius a name in the vampire chronicles? First and 2nd books are the best. The third one I got bored with and didn't read. I gave it a five. You're much better than many of people I've read poems of. Another five for you. ----->5

Very true, i feel like that sometimes, then just have to scold myself and come to the same conclusion you did. Hmm, another 5/5, this poems got me thinking...

It had a great title. the flow was great the rhyming was good. and over all i just loved it. 5/5

I love this. im not usually a religious person but i really do like this poem. it kind of has a little story behind it. the wording is great and the flow is amazing. great job 5*5

I liked the story you portrayed behind this piece it was sad and emotional. God does care as i'm sure you know so don't doubt that. A great flow almost chanting to me. I didn't get bored while reading this piece was hooked from start to finish. Well done on creating such a good piece of poetry. 5/5~mel

Such a sad and desperate poem, i loved the feeling behind it, great job.

This was a great piece of art, the flow to this one was flawless just like the rhymes. You did a fantastic job, yet I would like to mention that you should place punctuation in your work, i find that...poetry without punctuation is like a song without a melody. I have learned that on this site, I hope my advice is of any help. I think that you are a great writer, keep writing!

I don't like last stanza. This poem is amazing. Topic and message of this piece are great. It is unique and excellently written.
Well done! 5/5

The message was evidently a fact and I agree with every word said.

Now is the time
I need him the most,
But he's up and vanished,
Just like a ghost

I liked this part because I think I can relate to it pretty much.

This is a well written piece.

Wow! Good poem. The flow is good and the passion is right there! It has so much emotion that you can feel it all the way through the poem. Great job!

I liked this one but some of the rhyming seem sort of forced.. but other than that it was really enjoyable to read!!! keep it up! :o]