by Tracy D Rollings Jul 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In my life I have met a lot of people |
by she
Yet another great poem,so powerful, and so true,very sad though, i'm so sorry this happened to you. |
by Kelly
This is an amazing write. And its so true, there is no way you can really imagine it unless you expierance it. It confuses me, i dont understand why someone would do the things they do so i cant imagone how confusing it would be for a child. Not knowing what they did wrong to deserve it. Not realisin that no one deserves that. Especially a child, who is supposed to be protected. I think it really drives home the fact that you have to try to help if you know deep down something not right is going on. You cant just take the attitude that its not your problem and doesnt concern you becuase it concerns everybody and i think this poem really highlights this. Great write, lost for words again - so i ramble. |
by Kaz
Sir this is an amazing piece of wrk.. truly.. the way u express how a child feels.. u actually reveal.. or u somehow.. just present this in such an awesome way..every line evry wrd has a meaning to it.. a continuos flow of feelings n thoughts.. wow ur just amazing |
by isa
Wow!! this poem is wonderful i been through that!! and some is still left inside of me....great poem |
by genova
Wow this poem is mind blowing i love it.. |