Thankyou for sharing that poem - i relate to that very much and just think your very brave strong and admirable to have been through this and write about it. well done i really did think highly of your poem xxxxxxx

Child abuse is really terrible and yeah some are not so lucky. I'm really sorry that you had to go through this for so long. I just know such a thing from tv but never knew a person that experienced it. Take care Tracy! Keep on writing.

Oh, you always make me cry with your poems. This piece is so touching, and honest. Every stanza is heart- breaking.
It's excellently written, and filled with emotions. You're truly great poet, Tracy, every poem of yours is a little masterpiece.

Omg that poem has just made me speechless wow so well written and very emotional i feel like cryin seriously, i reli like it xx

Wow, If someone every left bruises on me or hurt me so bad i could sit, I don't think I would even care to even hide the bruises. Its sad that no one notices, No one can tell when someone is hurting... They are to busy with there life. We need some people to start caring and looking for kids that are being abused. Sure there is Children services but they only come if they are called and surely the kid can't call them. Sorry to be rambling again :P Its awesome how you can put so much feeling and thought in your poems. They are so good i could write forever :P 5/5 Deserves a 10 though ^_^ Excellent piece!

Wow this poem is mind blowing i love it..

Wow!! this poem is wonderful i been through that!! and some is still left inside of me....great poem

Sir this is an amazing piece of wrk.. truly.. the way u express how a child feels.. u actually reveal.. or u somehow.. just present this in such an awesome way..every line evry wrd has a meaning to it.. a continuos flow of feelings n thoughts.. wow ur just amazing

This is an amazing write. And its so true, there is no way you can really imagine it unless you expierance it. It confuses me, i dont understand why someone would do the things they do so i cant imagone how confusing it would be for a child. Not knowing what they did wrong to deserve it. Not realisin that no one deserves that. Especially a child, who is supposed to be protected. I think it really drives home the fact that you have to try to help if you know deep down something not right is going on. You cant just take the attitude that its not your problem and doesnt concern you becuase it concerns everybody and i think this poem really highlights this. Great write, lost for words again - so i ramble.

Kelly
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Yet another great poem,so powerful, and so true,very sad though, i'm so sorry this happened to you.