Great work very good language use xxxxx well done xxxx

Very very good.

Jeannie
This is awesome. The imagery and word choices are perfect. Such a sad piece.

The perilous journey
For the soul now to awake
Comes tender release
From the feel of each breath as it breaks
A shadow of comfort
In tears formed that fall in the night
Rests silent the heart
From the struggle of life

Very heartfelt.
Excellent job my friend.
Love Cindy

Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..