Just want?
by xxx032107xxx Jul 23, 2007
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And you just want to be happy and feel alive. You just want to love the weekends because that's when you have the most fun. You want to actually enjoy going to school everyday and see the people that make you smile. What happens when that DOESN'T happen? And there's not much that can actually make you smile? You just wish you could let it out; scream, cry, laugh. Do whatever it takes to make yourself happy because you can't always count on other people to do it for you. |
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17 years ago
A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!
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17 years ago
by deandre
I like it because i can relate to to it i give you 4/5
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17 years ago
by Hatori
Hello ^.^
I like the topic that you chose to write about, but I didn't feel that much emotion. If you chose different words, then maybe that would help, but I dunno, that's just me. I think that another thing that would help, is if you put this poem into stanzas. You don't have too though.
Other than that, don't change a thing ^_^ Keep it up, 4/5
With all due respect,
Hatori
P.S. If you get a chance, could you please RRC one of my poems?
Thanks! ^.- -
17 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
Yeah good poem xxxx keep writing xxx take kare hun xxx
