Very unique and interesting. It is short but still very powerful. Atmosphere that you created is superb and whole piece is written excellently. It isn't classic love poem which is great. Wording is also good and it is very easy to read. Every line is well written and emotions are beautifully expressed. This poem really deserves 5/5

I can picture it all.It was short,simple,&sweet.4/5

<3Amber

In this piece I like the flow but I think the structure needs a little work. Word choice is good and the meaning is clear.

Fsams

To me this was gorgeous. The imagery was absolutely beautiful expecially the butterflys and chalk drawings. Again throughout this piece I loved the the flow and the structure was unique and different but I truely liked it alot. Again an awsome job. ~Mel

I thought this was actually really beautiful teria, it was simple and yet it was really detailed and thoughtful and that's what really appealed to me in the poem, so amazing and gorgeous and really sorta gives off a feeling of hope and strength somehow.
5/5
gabriella