This is good, ironic also, that the things we make frighten us. Very nice. 5/5

Hmmmm...I like the idea of the poem, I don't quite know whatelse to say, nothing stood out as bad or good for me.

Interesting poem, I like it very much. Atmosphere that you created is great and this piece is very unique. Flow is excellent and imagery is superb, topic is also good. 5/5

OMG dude this is really good it got me thinking keep up the good work

This poem has an excellent flow and is definitely dark! 5/5