Very nicely worded and written creatively. I like the way words strung each other making it cohesive. Plse make note of these corrections...do you think they are/their kind, my dear, they are/their not kind

Keep it up
Fsams

Wow...this poem is awesome and very true. creatvie also. =) great job

Its realy good and dark and always you got fears,and its good that you know this and try to face well done