I Need Help Too...

by Roxy   Jul 23, 2007


Truthfully, I'm not special nor am I perfect.
Just a girl searching for her place in this world I like to call 'hell'.
Though poetry sets my mind astray from reality,Its the only time I can express myself freely.
I know I can be deep but it takes a true friend to surpass my hatred.

I find it hard to trust anyone,
sometimes I feel like I can't even trust myself.
I love to help people sometimes Its too much to cope with, Then I find out that as I'm helping others their not the only ones that need help.
I need help too.....
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Sorry I know this isn't one of my best poems but I had a lot on my shoulder and I really needed to dish it out. Just so much going on so Yeah.. =] xx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Otay..You dont have to care if its good or not. .wt matters is that u let out wt u were holding inside.. and to add to that.. u did it in an amazing way.. so.a w00-h00 @ this superb write.. :P
    truly fely.
    im sure u felt better after lightening up ur mind :)

    keep writing

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Sometimes your expression of your feeling can be your best pieces of work. Your feelings are felt in this piece. Yes, we all need help from time to time even those that give it as well. May your heart once again feel the peace and joy that you seek soon young lady.

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Nice write..yea..that helps me at times too..great going..

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    I like it though =] Sometimes a poem doesn't have to rhyme.. and can be beautiful as well. =] Cause then it's just a philosophic story, just you, thinking about your feelings. And writing them down. =]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    It doesn't have a rhythm or rhyme that I can see and I tend to dislike those poems more but this was really good for what it is.
    5/5

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