It doesn't have a rhythm or rhyme that I can see and I tend to dislike those poems more but this was really good for what it is.
5/5

I like it though =] Sometimes a poem doesn't have to rhyme.. and can be beautiful as well. =] Cause then it's just a philosophic story, just you, thinking about your feelings. And writing them down. =]
5/5

Nice write..yea..that helps me at times too..great going..

~Wake~

Sometimes your expression of your feeling can be your best pieces of work. Your feelings are felt in this piece. Yes, we all need help from time to time even those that give it as well. May your heart once again feel the peace and joy that you seek soon young lady.

sadaddy

Otay..You dont have to care if its good or not. .wt matters is that u let out wt u were holding inside.. and to add to that.. u did it in an amazing way.. so.a w00-h00 @ this superb write.. :P
truly fely.
im sure u felt better after lightening up ur mind :)

keep writing

~Wake~