Thats really good, take kare xxxxx

Do u know what i like about ur poem..
its comes from heart and goes throught the heart...
keep it up

I know this emotions from the poem u have experienced them for real.u wrote beautifully what u feel down the paper

Wow really good poem i can really relate and i cud tell u wrote this from ur heart. keep it up 5/5!!! <3

xoxo

This was a great poem nice job keep it up!

I so agree. I know how you feel, boys are so complicated!!! why can't they just be simple!!!like GEESH!!! lol, dont worry though, it obvously wasnt meant to be....great poem I loved it, keep writing =)

That is a very good poem:) Thankx 4 the comment you sent me!! I really do love this poem tho!!! Good job!! Good luck on your other ones 4 the future!

I think this poem was very unique and had a lot in it. All I can critique is to maybe watch your grammar. But the poem was absolutely beautiful. Keep it up.
<3Raych

and thanks for the comment

Thanks for the comment i really like this keep it up love always linda

Fantastic job, and there's no need to tell you how emotional it was to read because you know how emotional it was to write. All of your work is powerful, best of luck to yah, you deserve it. 5/5 sweetie

Touching loverly poem!
Keep up the good work

Danielle
xx

5/5