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by Serina the Squid Jul 23, 2007 category : Life, society / other
In this drain I sit alone winding down these thoughts of mine so simple on their own strung into their brisk design And I hate to watch you swallow each thought as it begins each hole to you seems hollow so you cower and fear wins You are not suffocating but rather simply breathing and the rhythm's rather grating and the pattern simply seething You think you're smart by proving a point without a reason yet your still life still is moving and your winter's out of season
by mistressxsork
"and your winter's out of season" My favorite line throughout. The depth was so astonishing. You really know how to write with everything. You amaze me time and time again. Overall Rating: 5.0/5