Comments : Cry

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very well written poem xxxx

  • I like it!Maybe you should change the layout of it though to make it seem a little longer,just a thought but,5/5

    <3Amber

  • Cry through the night,
    And cry through the day,
    Cry all the time,
    And cry all the way.

    Its all because of you...
    You did everything to make me cry,
    I just wanna cut & die.

    I did everything you wanted me too
    And all I got was a ' I Hate You,
    Just do this and just do that.

    In my head there was only you,
    Not anymore your gone out of my head,
    And out of my heart.'

    Crying is all there is left to do,
    So know I just say THANK YOU!

    Like this..layout change.Just highlight,copy,&paste.^_^

    <3Amber