I feel for you

by jackie   Jul 23, 2007


I am covered in your warm embrace.
I am surrounded by your sweet laughter,
your lively smile,
your lovin touch.
You and I are like peices to a puzzle,
we fit into one another.
I feel us becoming one, just as i feel my heart yearn everytime your gone.
I feel loved..
I feel secure...
I feel that twinkle in my eye...
but mostly i feel alive.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Joe

    Hey u put this one on my wall

  • 17 years ago

    by Krazy

    I think this is a good start, the structure could use some work, but the content is good. you've got a good variety of words, using more descriptive vivid words would help. but like i said, you've got a good start, you have what it takes. good job (:

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