Comments : I feel for you

  • 17 years ago

    by Krazy

    I think this is a good start, the structure could use some work, but the content is good. you've got a good variety of words, using more descriptive vivid words would help. but like i said, you've got a good start, you have what it takes. good job (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Joe

    Hey u put this one on my wall