Thats heavy writing, good job xxxx

Wow...i really really liked this poem..so dark and yet had a gr8 feel to it aswell
this was my fav stanze

Deceptive images, portrayed amongst innocent minds,
Muffled screams, corrupt the feeling of serenity.
As I creep into your thoughts, spreading my blackness,
You remain still, with the feeling of insecurity.

u sure do know how to write gr8 poems
kep up the good work!!
bree