Charisma, this was such a sad poem. I really enjoyed how you tied the title in to the ending line of each stanza, it really made me feel the emotion. The flow was good and rhyming was okay as well. Good job!

Charisma... what can i say but very touching poem.... it's really good!! The emotion you want to express really express....ALLOT! good one charisma....

Well, I like the wording and things but I REALLY wish you would step outside of the box! You have too much talent to waste it over this one person again and again and again and again...you know? Hope to see more soon about other things.
~Midnight Sun