Hmm..wow..Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

WOW
I really liked this poem
You can tell that you were really hurt
Its a great poem!

Wow great job I love this poem lots of emotion and great flow, i feel the same before and i know how hard it is great job keep it up...

gene Ross

I loved it and i can relate and nice style 5/5

Excellent poem Loveless. It was so full of sadness and you could feel the pain pouring out of it.. Great job, I loved every single line. 5/5

Kayla!!! My goodness girl! The pain is so clear, It's seeping through your words-penned so beautifully- and cutting into my own heart.
I can feel your pain.
The emotions that run deep.
I read this poem to jake, and all he could say was woah thats deep. He was speechless!
You did awsome. The rymths where done well, and it flowed perfectly.
Well done hun,
Elaine.

This was beautiful kayla, the only thing i would change is the ending to be: 'tonight i will finally die' without the 'so' at the beggining, it was really good though, the flow was so smooth and consistent through the sadness of this poem. it is so relatable and gorgeous.
5/5
luv,
gabriella

This was beautifully written ... it flowed really nicley and the rhyme didn't seem at all forced .. well done :)

Wow this poem is really good i really liked it its sad but it expresses so many emotions great job i will contine to read more of your poems

laura

You can really feel the pain. I can relate. Sometimes that's what guys only care about is themselves but in the end when we're happy they want us back. Oh well! Well great poem.

This was a really good one.
im definately adding you to my favorites.

Wow. Amazing. So much pain and emotion was portrayed in this poem. I just loved it. From start to finished you kept the flow flawless and the rhyming excellent.

0ne thing you can improve on this poem is to put it into stanzas. It just makes the poem more organized and easier to read.

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

I liked it, but the ending should have been stronger. The whole poem was very strong and then at the end it just got a little cliched and weaker. Don`t get me wrong, it was good. And many readers will be able to relate to it, but it`s missing something. Keep up the writing, Dear.

5.5
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This is wonderful! 5/5

Hmmmm idk if i liked this to be honest. i mean its good. its just that i kno how this feels and its hurts...like hell.

I like it. It is really nice. Keep up all the good work on your writing.

I really liked this one, Rikku. It's one of my favorites... Even if I can't exactly relate to it yet, I'm sure that I will eventually. I liked how strong it was. I'm sorry about your ex.
~LovestruckChild~

Ohhh wow
this poem is so sad and emotional and all
i loved it (Y)

xo.louii

I really liked this poem. It almost made me cry Rikku. Keep up the amazing work. Love you bunches <33333

I liked it 5/5