Wow..alto of deep emotions running deep in this poem..brilliant
liked the wording and the flow was wonderful
keep up the gr8 work
and memba love is the greatest joy in the world!...so if someoned doesnt love u bak make sure ur happy

gr8 writes
tk care:d
bree

Wow..alto of deep emotions running deep in this poem..brilliant
liked the wording and the flow was wonderful
keep up the gr8 work
and memba love is the greatest joy in the world!...so if someoned doesnt love u bak make sure ur happy

gr8 writes
tk care:d
bree

Wow..alto of deep emotions running deep in this poem..brilliant
liked the wording and the flow was wonderful
keep up the gr8 work
and memba love is the greatest joy in the world!...so if someoned doesnt love u bak make sure ur happy

gr8 writes
tk care:d
bree

I love this! i have a few that are nearly the same... if you have a myspace u should add mine. =) www.myspace.com/amanda_loves_jake_4ever

Very emotional,it touched my heart....keep up the good work.
best regards,
Mary

Thanks for the comments... ill read some of your works too... qnd ill r/c/c it...

Deeeply touch me becaue i can relate now !!!

great job

jsut i hoped you ad some rhyming to it