What a good poem about broken love. Losing your love is so painful. This can be felt in the words you have penned.
Take Care Cindy

Disregarding the poem's technical errors, I see another promising work, which could be enhanced in the future, along with a rather nice concept. Sometimes the person one loves doesn't have to perfectly match up with one's ideals, for it only leads to disappointment. Perfection isn't always necessary when it comes to loving a person, or choosing a person to love. In fact, due to the said person's imperfections, the subject's feelings for her grew even more...just my thoughts anyway... :) Thanks for sharing.