by Raven Jul 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I gave you my heart |
Great job. Easily related to but i do agree with some prior people. Work on your rhyming and you'll do even better. Keep writing. =) |
by xXxemzxXx
Hey great poem i really like it your poems are great keep it up kk |
by Wallace
Great piece, such strong emotions, I really liked the opening lines really eye-catching. Great work. Keep it up. |
Thats a very good poem..Its writen well..Its almost perfect..Keep up the wirting your doing great..CAnt wait to read more... |
by amber
Good job. keep it up. i know exactly what this is saying im kinda going through the same thing. |