Very beautiful and sad poem. I too lost someone I love. I can relate to it.

I am sorry for your loss but I have some knowledge of what that feels like. It was a great poem...5

Beautiful! Just beautiful! 5/5

Aw this is so sad.. i have not lost my mom.. but i mise well have cause shes never here for me... this is a very touching poem. i liked it a lot..keep up the great work. i rate this a 5

Aww this is sad...sorry for your loss..the poem is beautifull written.i really like it... keep your head up though...*gives you a hug* best wishes to you.

Aww this i a very beautiful yet sad peice, however its penned perfectly. A truely heartfelt and touching peice. I'm so sorry for your loss, But dont let it get you down, i'm sure your mum would be roud of you: your writting is incredible, both peices that i have read have truely touched me. Keep your head high! *hugs*
another 5/5
xxx

Nice piece, I really like the forever for ever part, excellently done, great job man, keep it up.