Comments : The Perfect Blemish

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very sweet. I loved what he said to you...how sweet! You worded it well! Good job!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a beautiful poem. More like a story than a poem though.. Anyway I like the message behind this poem, I think that the flow was fine. Just a suggestion.. Put a (.) in the last line. =)

    Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautifully Shattered

    He is a very sweet guy! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by njabulo b

    That was good.

  • 17 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Love this poem coz it tells a clear story that holds so many secrets beyond the word

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I can relate to this so much Midnight and it made me want to cry
    The pure love in these words is a sight you don't see often

    "It was a blessing to find him
    Someone willing to accept imperfection
    One who doesn't love me to change me
    But someone who loves me with truest affection"

    The flow may be off (as you said) but when it comes from the heart, it's hardly noticeable
    Brava
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "Because then you wouldn't be perfect."

    WOW.... that's literally what I said to myself after reading that line. To have a guy say that to you must make you feel like the most amazing thing in the world. Great job, honestly.... keep it up and I'll keep checking out your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem keep up the good work and take care.