by *Charisma*
Very sweet. I loved what he said to you...how sweet! You worded it well! Good job! |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a beautiful poem. More like a story than a poem though.. Anyway I like the message behind this poem, I think that the flow was fine. Just a suggestion.. Put a (.) in the last line. =) |
He is a very sweet guy! :) |
by njabulo b
That was good. |
by PoEtiCmYme
Love this poem coz it tells a clear story that holds so many secrets beyond the word |
by Gem
I can relate to this so much Midnight and it made me want to cry |
"Because then you wouldn't be perfect." |
by Cassie Cain
Great poem keep up the good work and take care. |