Wow this is an amazing poem.... you can really see what you are saying.... great job!!!

Well I can relate to this poem.. 'we cannot control love..'

Anyway It was a great poem.. I have one suggestion though.. capitalize the I's =)

Nonetheless. a good poem - keep up the good work!

Very romantic song. i love the way you have exprssed yourt feelings. i know there are many great writers in this website. you are one of them. May God bless you.

take care 5/5