So good Chelsey....

I hope you are as lucky as Cindy...she married her childhood sweetheart and stayed with him till he passed...doesn't hardly happen anymore so best wishes for that.

Beautiful, strong. I really hope that kind of relationship won't fall apart for you two. Cute ryhmes. Really enjoyed it!
5/5 Keep writing.

Wow that was beautiful!!! i could relate to this poem in so many ways....especially since im getting married on the 30th of this month...and i know how it feels to have people doubting on your relationship all the time.....well once again you did an amazing job....it feels good to know that theres other people trying to prove to others that young love can last...definetly a 5/5:)