The dance hall represents todays society.
I loved how you described everything to perfection.

"see the man with the feathery hat and eighteen hundreds coat"

To me this shows that no matter age we live in, People don't change.
His clothing made it out that he was representing the fact even back in the 1800's
people were greedy, insecure and so on.

Well done sweettiieee piee.

One little thing that stuck out to me, The repetition of "People" on the last line threw off the flow for me.

But well written, I love you :)