by CEE CEE Jul 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My heart beats painfully bleeding out for you |
Great poem! |
by Veamm
Good! |
by Miranda
Great poem.I could really feel your emotions in it.A few grammer mistakes,but you could fix that up in a heartbeat. |
by Blissful
Well done ! I loved the repitition because it really got your message through. The poem was deep and the language used was stricking. *5/5* |
Wow...You should really put this in stanzas, and use more puncuation..It would be pretty awesome...Keep writting though.... |