by Monica AKA Mika Jul 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I cant stop thinking about you-Your always running through my head... |
by Javier
You know after reading a lot of these poems i see that you have been through a lot in your life but your a strong person and this was a great poem. |
by Melpomene
I found this poem to be quite sweet, although I really didn't like the repetition of "I can't" The structure was hard to read for me in some places although I really found the emotion you portrayed to be really sweet and caring showing your love towards someone. So overall a 4/5~mel |
by Debbie
In all honesty, I particularly dislike the repetition of "I can't..." on this piece. It's highly structured with uninviting points, whereas the sincerity of your devotion to a certain someone deserves to be esteemed by me. :) Nice. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Awwww!That was a sweet,sincere and truly beautiful poem.It was full of emotion&meaning.I love it!5/5^-^ |
This was a sweet poem, and it's nice that it was written especially for/about someone. However, I found the repetition somewhat annoying. Also, when writing 'can't', you need an apostrophe, and you didn't once use one, which made the repetition more annoying. |