Awww so sweet.....

i think you should put this poem into stanzas.. it would draw more attention to it... but thats just my opinion.... great poem though.5/5

It was great and really sweet, i like the message enveloped in each words of each lines though it will look much better if you try to enhanced more of your words and avoid using the words in the beginning.. hope i didn't offend you, jst my opinion. I like it anyway.

Aww this was very sweet. i liked this one a lot. i can tell ur happy about writting this poem. and it flowed very nicely.. great job.

This is cuteee =] Even though my bf and I just broke up, I can still rely ^^
And in this poem I do like the repitition.. =]! 5/5 again ^^

This was a sweet poem, and it's nice that it was written especially for/about someone. However, I found the repetition somewhat annoying. Also, when writing 'can't', you need an apostrophe, and you didn't once use one, which made the repetition more annoying.

Also, don't forget to capitalise your 'I's.

Awwww!That was a sweet,sincere and truly beautiful poem.It was full of emotion&meaning.I love it!5/5^-^

<3Amber

In all honesty, I particularly dislike the repetition of "I can't..." on this piece. It's highly structured with uninviting points, whereas the sincerity of your devotion to a certain someone deserves to be esteemed by me. :) Nice.

I found this poem to be quite sweet, although I really didn't like the repetition of "I can't" The structure was hard to read for me in some places although I really found the emotion you portrayed to be really sweet and caring showing your love towards someone. So overall a 4/5~mel

You know after reading a lot of these poems i see that you have been through a lot in your life but your a strong person and this was a great poem.