by Monica AKA Mika Jul 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
{Alright before you read this poem you must know that the word Poetry repeats its self for a reason and it sounds better if you read it out loud and pause after each time you say Poetry...i hope you understand...enjoy..} |
by Javier
I really liked the way you repeated the word poetry it made me get into it more i really enjoyed this one a lot! |
by Melpomene
Now this is where I truely liked the repetition of "Poetry" you used repetition well throughout this entire piece it gave it a nice effoect. The word choice was quite simple I think if you added something more to this it would built up the emotions and portrayed what you are saying with such a stronger tone so to say. The meaning behind this though was great. I did enjoy it to overall again a 4/5 ~mel |
by Debbie
Mika, |
by Angela
Yes.. that does describe poetry.. |
by Fsams
Great, this is a totally different variety. I loved the contrast and descrete style in thi spoem. The ryhthm is great and I loved it in totality. (I think it fits better in misc) |