How come you treat me this way???

by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx   Jul 25, 2007


How come you have to treat me this way???
its the same every single day.
you show off for your friends
but when your alone, its all different at the end
i thought i liked you
maybe even loved too
you want to use those words
that you know hurt me
but maybe just maybe
you can chill out
and you wouldn't have to listen to me pout.
you always wonder why i get mad
but I'm done
I've had all i can have
cant you see it behind my eyes
in this relationship I'm living in dark gray skies
i just want to make things work
even if it is for the better or the worst.
but no matter what
how come you treat me this way???

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aww this is a very sad but good poem, i could feel and understand all of the emotions that filled this poem. A very heart felt peice, with a good flow and structure.
    5/5
    xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    I feel a lot like that as well...
    loved your poem...
    it's a beautiful way to portrait your feelings...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Vey sad poem in a way.. i know the feelin cause im going through the same.. the poem flowed very nicely.. keep up the good work. i rated this a 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    It was simple though i can feel the emotions in there, and it was really sad. the flow is a little off to me but i like the message..keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I really like it. The flow is a little off sometimes, but over all it's really well written. You lay most guys flat out.

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