I really like it. The flow is a little off sometimes, but over all it's really well written. You lay most guys flat out.

It was simple though i can feel the emotions in there, and it was really sad. the flow is a little off to me but i like the message..keep it up!!!

Vey sad poem in a way.. i know the feelin cause im going through the same.. the poem flowed very nicely.. keep up the good work. i rated this a 5.

I feel a lot like that as well...
loved your poem...
it's a beautiful way to portrait your feelings...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Aww this is a very sad but good poem, i could feel and understand all of the emotions that filled this poem. A very heart felt peice, with a good flow and structure.
5/5
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