Maybe I'll Learn

by Jennifer Dziak   Jul 25, 2007


I used to swing at everything,
Now I dont swing at all.
Maybe someday I'll learn
to closely watch the ball.

I used to laugh at everything
Now I'm not sure how
Maybe someday I'll realize
Life has its ups, and downs.

I used to cry at everything
Now I'm just so hollow
Maybe someday I'll find
The path I'm meant to follow

I used to scream at everything
Now my voice is gone
Maybe someday I'll learn
To hear nature's song

I used to care for everyone
Now I'm distant and numb
Maybe someday I'll realize
Not to be so dumb

I used to swing and everything
Now I hardly swing at all
Maybe someday I'll learn
To closely watch the ball.

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  • 15 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Really deep poem.

    5/5

    nami

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    This poem is sooo simple yet it says soo much and thats wat makes its such a great poem.

    A++!

    .:Katelyn:.

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    I love the imagery in this. It's great. It's one of my favorites. And plus i'm a softball player so i like how it talks about swinging the ball lol :D thanks for the comment on mine :D it means alot. I'm going through a rough time
    thanks again, keep reading and writing
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    I really like this poem its very to the point well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    I like this. it describes stuff like i feel well and stuff

    very well done
    keep it up (Y)

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