That was so goods i loved the emotion rate back

^one-liner..*he*he*he*
This is how you comment a poem...
Wow!I loved the word choices and the flow was flawless.It was full of heartfealt emotions.I think nearly everyone can relate to a break up so it should attract a lot of other people.Of course I'm going to give you a 5/5 for a very great piece!^_^

<3Amber

I like this poem...i really feel like i could relate to when it comes to my ex but over all well writen and good flow..keep it up and thanks for commenting mine

Birgit,

Once again you have created another sincere poem from your heart. I can really feel your emotions in this written piece. It flowed nicely too =) Keep up the fantastic work. Remember 'Smile!' ^_^

Dear Birgit,

Dont worry to get stuck,
Ill just come running down,
And give you some of my spare luck,

Dont be down,
Your still worth that one special crown,
It will be yours,
Whenever the time is there to be yours...

And dont worry, if you see no light, just call my name, and ill come flashing...!

XxxX
Zima

The only suggestion I have is to keep the structure and rhyme scheme the same throughout the whole piece because it can lose it's flow otherwise, but on the up side, I LOVED your opening stanza, it really drew me in!
Charisma*

Guess I didn't comment after all Lol. I do like this poem a lot. It has a good, strong message, one that I'm strongly for. You might like my poem 'let your ignorance be your bliss'. I don't have much to say, this poem's pretty good.

Great poem. The ending was perfect, It's actually a great piece of advise, to love yourself instead of wasting it on someone who doesn't deserve it. The flow of this piece and rhyming as well were superb! 5/5

marcella

Great poem
really sad
good job

Keenan

Hmm, i can really relate to this, a very good read. 5/5, thnak you for the comments as well.

x

Great poem.
Really sad.
Loved reading it.
Btw, thanks for all your comments, they are always welcome.
Take care

Wow it makes you think am i doing this to my girl very awe inspiring very nice write keep it up kudos

Hhmmm well i guess love sucks right

:( sad...