Wow. I don't quite understand what you're speaking of, but it's a good poem, just the same! You're a great writer, your poems make that apparent.:) keep writing!

This reminded me of Charmed. Idk if you watch it but yeah, I think that was the name of the demon person...eh..
Anyways, I liked it . . . very dark, creative write.
5/5.

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Really well done
xx