Wow!!! This hits home for me with
surgery in both my knees it is a great
help having a loving person there for
you when you really need them.
A great read indeed with excellent
rhyme and flow thank you for sharing
Write On,
Bogie

Very beautiful

Ohh wondeful...short and so heartfelt too
just loved it
5/5
for me keep it up bree
tk care

Personaly i dont know if its about your husband or your dad, but i had pretty much the same with my papa untill he died anyway.
great poem, hte words flowed nicly
5/5
r/ bk

Wow, this is amazing peace. The choice of words in it is great, and the poem is filled with emotions. I like the ending very much.
5/5 from me

Hi angela...Take care...and don't worry...Michael will be just fine :)

Beautiful, sad, touching...Lovely poem Willow

Wow! Beautiful poem, you created wonderful atmosphere and expressed emotions greatly. You really know how to write short but POWERFUL poem. 5/5

WOW that was a beautiful poem, and it reminds me of myself , in the same situation , I have to use one myself and it makes me feel that people look down on me, but I don't care, wonderfully written poem , thanks for sharing,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

This makes me think of my grandfather. you have a sensational style!