I REALLY LIKE THE FLOW OF IT BUT IT CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD ESPECIALLY THE TITLE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

I didnt understand your poem about rape and hurting someone. Well if that turns you on each to their own

This poem is a bit unusual, well actually over the top unusual, well actually beyond strange. Didn't understand the title and it did really catch me off guard, and when i really started reading it REALLY CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD. Don't understand the poem very well, but hey, that what u wrote, then go head.

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Oh wow... this is really a diffrent standpoint than from teh normal stories i read here.. but what a good way to tell teh story.. i useally hate to say.. good job on the writeing here.. because their such sad stories.. but this really is a job well done.. very descriptional.. i like that. 5/5
-Marina

Defiantly a 5/5.... i dont know why they dont get it.. it seems to me like this guy felt that she did not like him that way and he is obsessed with her, so he killed her first so he could have sex with her??.. is that right??.. well its a good poem for different interpretations.. and very well written, also very powerful.. amazing
<3ang

Kinda perverse...but i guess that was the point huh. Good Job you had a lot of descriptions

Your sick as f**k how an earth can u put tht on here! dont u understand what u did was wrong! I HOPE U DIE i hate people like u! how would u like it if ur rights where taking away from u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was shoked for about 10 min after reading this. And though i don't totally understand this poem you have done a good, great job at exspressing yourself which is one of the things poetry is about. so 5/5.
keep writting