This poem touched me dearly.. i am in this situtation times 2.. this poem is hurtfull and i can sence the emotion all the way through.. i rate this a 5.. great work

Gosh!!! michelle im soo jealous of your writing talent. and i wish i had it. lol even though a lot of your poems remind me of guys in the past and almost make me cry..lol..i love them all sooo much and well i hate you because you write so well!! lol joking. 5/5 again

Short but well-written. The poem is clear without being too plain.

This is great. I can really feel the heartache and emotion you put into it. The flow, as usual, is perfect. 5/5

marcella

This poem is typical and too ordinary, I read better poems from you. I don't want to offend, I'm just saying my opinion. This is on ordinary, little bit pathetic break-up poem. It needs better wording and some metaphors. I won't rate it, I don't want to downrate your pieces just because I don't like them.

Another great poem
This poem is exactly what i/i've felt
keep it up:)

Break-ups and heartaches suck. I think everyone can relate to this poem. It's a common theme but it never gets old. This poem flows very nicely =) Keep up the good work 5/5

Laugh,tears, touch, memories
these things has became a part of my life as well, for a person who left me with all the same memories that you have mentioned in this great poem,
another great poem by you dear, this poem deserve nothing less than a perfect 5/5

I like this a lot.. but I don't.. becuase it reminds me what I'm probably going to have to be preparing for in the near future. I hate breakups, esspcialy if you've let yourself come to really love the person. Great poem though, brought out emotions in me, which is what a good poem should do =) nice indeed

Wow, short but perfectly structured and with great lines :)
coment back :D

This poem so so far my favorite.. and i read 3! i can relate to this also! keep up the good job. you're a great writer! 5/5 =)

This one was really good too. It sounds like you were going through some rough times. But alot of people say, the best writing coes from the worst of times. good job 5/5

I try to forget your touch,
That always took away my fears.
And the fact that you'd been around,
For so many damn years.

Loved it. Your a really great writer, you have inspired me, bravo ....lol. 5/5

Wow I liked this alot, I know how it feels. It is great. 5/5

Wow totally know how that feels. nice poem, really sad, full of emotion. i like it a lot. good rhyming

I loved this so much, and oh how I can relate. I love how it was so simple yet expressed a diary full of emotions.

Well here is a sarcastic remark I guess you tried to forget with little sucess but good poem though. Sorry I just had to say that. Robert

I can definitely relate to this poem..

I try to forget our memories,
That we shared together.
And to forget those broken words,
"We'll be together forever."

i lovee that stanza.. amazing way to end the poem.. people always say forever.. but it seems to never end up that way. Amazing job once again! Keep it up. =)

You're really good at this whole repeating phrases thing in your poetry. I wish I could do something like that. I can feel the sadness coming from this poem though.
Well done 5/5
xx