Let Him Go

by Michelle18   Jul 25, 2007


I am your best friend,
You're beautiful inside and out.
But you always bring yourself down,
Always cry and pout.

All because one cruel guy,
Broke your fragile heart.
He said he loved you oh so much,
Then tears your world apart.

Honey, I'm here to tell you,
That its not worth the trouble.
And the more you think it is,
The more the pain will double.

Please just let him go,
Because it hurts me to see you crying.
When you show me your pain,
It makes me feel like dying.

Curry, I love you dearly,
And I want your heart to heal.
But until it finally does,
Your pain is what i will always feel.

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this is dedicated to my best friend curry...she opened her heart to the wrong guy and now she cant let him go..it kills me to see her hurt but i just wanted to let her know that im here for her.

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  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Aw, that really touched my heart...its good to know there are friends like you in this world!

    Brooke<3

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Honestly i liked the idea of it to show luv for your bestfriend and everything but the ryhming felt forced and the flow was off i would say work on those parts of it all not a bad poem it just felt forced sorry..

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this made me cry when you read to me on the phone=[ its really good though and i gave it 5/5. maybe you are right about bobby and i think im actually gonna try...

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Awww, this poem brought tears.. so sweet of a poem to help a friend.. this flowed nicely and its all around a perfect poem. keep up the good work. u have talent.. and i like ur choice of words.

    ~Honey, I'm here to tell you,
    That its not worth the trouble.
    And the more you think it is,
    The more the pain will double.~

    is my fav lines!!

  • 17 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Awww!!!!!I love it!!My boyfriend feels the same way about me hurting myself.I love it,love it,love it!!!!5/5^_^

    <3Amber

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