by Michelle18 Jul 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A young beautiful girl, |
by shabria
That was outstanding, very strong. loved it |
by A l y s s a
Another great poem, 5/5. Although I loved this, I felt that the ending was a little dissapointing...A poem like this needed an extra 'BAM' at the end, you know? |
by Tabitha
I absolutely loved this poem.. another one of my favorites.. personally i can't relate to this since I'm a daddy's girl lol but i have a friend who feels this way all the time! This is very strong and flowed naturally. Keep up the great work! |
Wow, this poem just left me heartbroken, such power with your choice of word and it flowed smoothly...wow! |
by Tara Kay
This is really sad. Its emotional and actually quite harsh how someone could be so cruel to there own child. You have an amazing talent. |