Wow, this poem just left me heartbroken, such power with your choice of word and it flowed smoothly...wow!

Brooke<3

I absolutely loved this poem.. another one of my favorites.. personally i can't relate to this since I'm a daddy's girl lol but i have a friend who feels this way all the time! This is very strong and flowed naturally. Keep up the great work!

Another great poem, 5/5. Although I loved this, I felt that the ending was a little dissapointing...A poem like this needed an extra 'BAM' at the end, you know?

I loved how you incorporated a conversation into this poem and used 'showing' rather than just 'telling'.

Alyssa. x

That was outstanding, very strong. loved it